Monday, January 29, 2007

Son Comments

Rating: 5.0

Strangers walk in distant lands
In jungles dense, on desert sands
But who'd have thought I'd live with one
Or give him love and call him son
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I M Swan
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James B. Earley 29 June 2008

So near and yet so far apart! This is a poignant story....vividly portrayed. Excellent composition.

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Deanna More 30 January 2007

Extremely powerful poem that truly evokes the emotions of it's reader. Wonderful, Patty! Great artistry. Deanna xx .

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