Monday, June 15, 2009

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Rating: 3.9

I watch him as he sleeps
Pure innocence wrapped in sheets
A tiny hand curls around teddy
His breathing low and steady.
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Claire Hastie
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Laurie Hill 28 June 2009

So sweet...so very very sweet....

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Meshack Sewe 25 June 2009

straight and fresh from the heart...sweet poetic flow.....rhymes so tasty as a mother's milk.....reminds me of my little boy...and no mum can pen it so...unless she's filled with motherly love....great poem Claire.....

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Akram Awadat 23 June 2009

good write, wonderful poem i like it 10+

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 June 2009

'I always think how lucky I am A child today but one day a man Until that day comes, I shall do my best To help him through life's crucial test' Sweet and cute idea, love it.10+++

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Claire Hastie

Claire Hastie

Glasgow, Scotland
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