Somewhere…somewhere…! Comments
Often I close my eyes
and you leave
Somewhere…, somewhere…! ?
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A beautiful and touching peace. Thank you for sharing such personal poem, my dear " poet" friend. Yes, you are a poet and a great one.
Luz you are a wonderful poet and woman... thank you very much... riza
Loss is where we see ourselves. Nothing ever replaces nowhere. A well imagined poem. I am impressed with the exploration of nowhere we know. Thank you for commenting on my A Million Sorrows.
A heart-touching poem beautifully depicting depths of feelings a mother inspires. Sterling inking!
I am honored by your comment and give you the opportunity to read from your poems... respect... dr riza
A poem for a mother, or for all mothers, the love of a child for his mother is so nicely painted
How could you leave this way? Lips still in wine parfume caressing eyes that clear the skies and wake them up. very beautiful... Thanks
Thank you Prabir it 's a poem this is a poem I have for my heart because poetry for the mother writes itself pensi
Often I close my eyes and you leave Somewhere…, somewhere I feel your pain of losing your beloved mother... a touching poem
Often I close my eyes you leave for somewhere….somewhere… But how could you leave me, how'd you leave like others! ? ........so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem on mother and love nicely executed.
I am thankful that you Kumaramani read and comment on my verses... thank you! dr. Riza
Kumaemani I'm glad a poet as you comment on my poetry. Thanks! Best wishes from dr. Riza
very beautiful really I also composed some one somewhere you may like it
An excellent piece of work! Fantastic ending! I loved reading this beautiful poem! .......10
Would you turn into Christ but I must be the Christ myself; you may be Mary at the most...........that hesitates to call himself a poet...... i smiled when i read it....... hai my dear Riza you are a poet.... ok? i baptize you today. you are a poet. tony
Thank you Toni; Dear Tony, thank you very much! The word poet is too hard to keep on the shoulders! I think, being a poet is a blessing and a curse as well!
Dr. Tony thank you! I think dear, poetry is a blessing, but a mountain to keep on the back
dr. balnarayana bandam, thank you. I appreciate your appreciation, especially after reading your poems
thank you Carl Rousell! I'm still alive, but I'm looking at getting out and hurts a lot
A poignant poem that gropes with a lost. Congrats on poem of the Day.
Often I close my eyes and you leave Somewhere…, somewhere…! ? Under the eyelids voices and endless spaces; but where could your walking stick, your age-bowed back and weary knees, lead you up, where? - - - - - - - - - An emotional write about the loving mother who has left for heavenly abode.The most touching lines are- - - Should I nail you on the wall on a black and white photo like your husband and my father? Would you turn into Christ
THE BINJAKS OF THE POETRY WILL BE TAKEN AND WE HAVE BEEN THE ANSWERS OF THE REPUBLIC OF LETTERS... I AM REPRESENTED BY YOUR READING
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