Tuesday, July 8, 2008

Somewhere Precious Comments

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A sun bleached fence facing the sea.
Sand dunes, sea grass, on windblown shore.
Seagulls hovering, wings spread wide,
calling as they’ve done times before.
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Ernestine Northover
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Duncan Wyllie 20 July 2008

I could almost smell the freshness of the sea, taste the salt in the air, This is so well put together, , if words could be knitted then you have shown us how, , don't send me the patterns, they remain your own unique gift Love duncan X

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I want to go to that place! Oh... hold on.... you just took me there. A perfect picture painted E. t x

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Lynda Robson 08 July 2008

A lovely peaceful write, refreshing and well penned, thanks 10 Lynda xxx

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Duncan Wyllie 08 July 2008

That all important series of moments that allow the mind to refresh and feel at ease again Wonderful writing, from a wonderful lady Thankyou Ernestine Love duncan X

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