Saturday, October 28, 2017

Somewhere Over The Simile. Comments

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Today was sad like midnight in the rain
And as lonely as a mountain in a storm
Making my mind loose
like a kite with a broken string
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Geoffrey Fafard
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John Ahern 28 October 2017

Hi Geoffrey, love the descriptive words you use in this poem. Not sure about the bad luck and misery.

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Geoffrey Fafard 28 October 2017

John. Sometimes I feel you have to have a little BL & M to write interestingly but only a little..ha ha.All good today my friend. Cheers Geoffrey.

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