Thursday, June 27, 2013

Somewhere In Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's a magical moment in time
for everyone who walks this life

Your chances and your dreams
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Dave Alan Walker
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 31 July 2013

The person will figure it out in time and will realize how and what to do and find happiness. This brings good vibes.

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R.j. Wynn 12 July 2013

The magic is in the future and the person

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Yasmin Khan 11 July 2013

Time offers opportunities to us at least once in life, very realistic idea.

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Valsa George 06 July 2013

The hope that there is a magical moment for everyone in life is such a comforting and invgorating thought! This poem is like an oasis in the blistering desert of life. Enjoyed!

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Smoky Hoss 06 July 2013

Very good one Dave, makes me want to pay more attention to living!

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Heather Wilkins 04 July 2013

a moment i time can only be captured once. beautiful write. short but I enjoyed

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Chandra Thiagarajan 03 July 2013

A great optimistic write which is short and sweet! ENJOYED!

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 July 2013

Very short and lovely poem. yes... dreams and chances are waiting....

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I do like to call this ''chances '' as our fate, Very cute poem

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Valerie Dohren 30 June 2013

A lovely thought, but many miss that moment and never recapture it.

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Farah Ilyas 29 June 2013

yeah agreed...opportunity & determination have one more aspect in life that is our dreams so true

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David Wood 29 June 2013

Somewhere along the road I lost the plot! Never mind, a lovely poem Dave

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Vipins Puthooran 28 June 2013

dreams and hopes are entwined in life// an excellent poem! ! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 28 June 2013

dreams and hopes are entwined in life/ an excellent poem! ! ! !

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Paul Brookes 28 June 2013

A dream is like a closed door you just have to find the key to open it A well thought poem liked it BB =: OD

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