Sunday, November 22, 2015

Somewhere In The Sky Comments

Rating: 4.8

Somewhere in the sky the clouds start to gather,
Beginning to get dark one hot summer day;
Few trees thirsty in the dry barren land
Are hoping for water after the searing sun's ray.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Avid Fan 03 May 2019

Somewhere in the sky the clouds start to gather, Beginning to get dark one hot summer day; Few trees thirsty in the dry barren land Are hoping for water after the searing sun's ray. Such a heartwarming poem, sir Bernard.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 October 2018

Those eyes can easily read not only the mind But also the heart that says hello or goodbye; Let me set my sight on what is yet to be seen, Let me live forever somewhere in the sky.........touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.

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Janel Roberts 02 October 2018

This is a nice poem I feel very calm and relaxed reading it. Good Job! !

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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