Wednesday, October 16, 2013

Somewhere In Fantasy Land Butter Cup Wind Dancer Comments

Rating: 5.0

One night while dancing in
fairyland
a certain fairy touched my
hand
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Heather Burns
COMMENTS
Dee Corpolongo 20 October 2013

Sounds about like a secret place I'd love to be~ somewhere under an old oak tree.... Beautiful and fun loving dreamy place~ can I tag along so we can race? :) thanks for lifting my momenta thoughts! Love this poem!

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C. P. Sharma 19 October 2013

I would love to be there to sing and dance, your fantasy sent me into trance. I loved it.

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Mary Forrester 19 October 2013

Loved it Heather, yes a beautiful dream.

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David Wood 19 October 2013

A gentle and delightful poem that flows very well. I enjoyed reading it.

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Danny Draper 18 October 2013

A gentle journey a floral fairy fantasy.

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 18 October 2013

fantastic! glued to the imagination. :)

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Valsa George 18 October 2013

So lovely! ! I feel i am a lost in a fairy land, falling asleep in clover, lush and deep and using crickets to wake me up! !

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Tribhawan Kaul 17 October 2013

The imagery brought in this poem of yours is excellent. Enjoyed the write.

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Noreen Carden 17 October 2013

Hello Heather a beautiful poem i agree with Dave Disney could create a film around this well done

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Wahab Abdul 17 October 2013

THIS IS YOUR WONDERFUL STORY WITH ALL SWEETNESS AND BEAUTY, , , , , , LOVELY theme to write a great poem...love this one....10

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 16 October 2013

He carries kisses in a jar Another one that touches the heart. Nice poem. Thank you.

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Lyn Paul 16 October 2013

Very beautiful as Dave has said, I am thinking more of a childrens book. Well written.

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Dave Walker 16 October 2013

A beautiful poem with a wonderful flow, it reads really well. Would make a great poem in a Disney film.

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Soumita Sarkar 16 October 2013

good write............bright imagination............please read my poems....

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