Thursday, December 25, 2014

Somewhere In Fantasy Land A Wedding Comments

Rating: 4.7

In the meadows lush
and deep
coming upon fairies
asleep
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Heather Burns
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Jazib Kamalvi 11 September 2017

Write comment. Imagination, Heather. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Khairul Ahsan 28 June 2017

'a small family busy at play tomorrow will be a beautiful day' - Felt the happiness that surrounds a family having a wedding. Nice poem.

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Amitava Sur 20 August 2015

A sweet cute poem which calms the mind and takes in childhood days with dreams and pleasure. Thanks for sharing.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 January 2015

A Beautiful poem with many captivating lines..... two little people one tiny ring all the joy lovers bring Yes, tomorrow will be another beautiful day. Loved reading it.

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Akhtar Jawad 02 January 2015

It's a beautiful description. If you don't say, how dare you, please let me add four more lines in this poem as the last stanza. A chaperon at the back benches, smiling and recollecting, the beautiful days, of her lovely teen age! ....................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 December 2014

Dancing around a fairy ring is definitely wonderful. This is a very nice poem shared. Touching one.

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Salini Nair 26 December 2014

beautiful write...enjoyed

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Lyn Paul 25 December 2014

So beautiful for young and old. Thank You

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