Somewhere In Dream Land My Dream Comments

Well said and so enjoyable. Read mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline

you are a very good and inspiring writer. Ash

Dreams can be such nebulous and fleeting things; don't you wish sometimes you could order up the dream you will have that night? I really like this poem. It makes me remember a time when I was young and could have had a similar dream..thanks for writing it.

A dream of a dream love and past, it makes the reader want him to be there for you, nice to read...regards

This is the first one of your poems I have had the deep honor and plesant surprise to read. I can see now that I am in for hours of splendid reading. It is easy to see that indeed I have triped over a true artist..... Hope you don't get to ill with my heaping it on.... But this is the truth the I am speaking.... Not the other.. In this short poem you have from the begining stroke painted a most vivid picture...and completed a fine delicate work........ Jim Troy

the language is excellent as you have displayed your feelings in simple manner. i love this poem. keep it up. be simple in expressions as in this one