Somewhere In Between Comments

A nice, beautiful and wonderful poem! ! ! The way you described the images and how you mix them up with your ideas is great! ! Mainly the last line where we can see clearly one of the mainly points of the poem.The poet always try to see what can not be seen for normal eyes, 'cause the only eyes he uses are their imagination's eyes and how he dig it up through his words. Keep writting +10! ! ! !

What do you want? You want to see it coming in or going out? I promise it'll be the way you want it..: -)