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Beautiful poem. Children are far way earning some where in far off lands. Parents are left alone. Many parents live alone. Sometimes questions comes in my mind, are the children right or are the parents right? I have seen many parents as well as children struggle to make up their living. Often when I come across this topic, it often make me think, what is right? I loved reading it.

Who knows where she went, United states or heaven, but where ever she may be I prays she rests in peace, your poem reminds me of my grandmother, thanks for sharing this wonderful poem :)

we all miss some one knowingly or unknowingly somewhere.................a real one........nice

Old age with away from the children a grief heart yet she used to come to park and seeing the Roses silently becaouse Roses resembled with roses that they were far lovely poem

A very realistic portrait of an old lady whose days once in a while may get brightened by the presence of her grand children! Then she becomes another little 'girl' romping and playing! But even in her loneliness, she has no complaints and spends her time coming out to the park and watching the beauty of flowers! If children ever thought how much they mean to their parents! A great write!

You have sketched the pen picture of a grandmother whose grandchildren are in abroad.Their presence is a source of real joy to her.Loved reading.

There are so many mothers in the country whose children are away. The emotional condition of these mothers and grand mothers have been impressively painted. A heart touching poem.