Monday, March 13, 2006

Somewhere Between A Man And A Little Boy Comments

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As I'm putting your laundry away
I stop to look around your room.
The hundreds of Hotwheels
parked, as they should be, in their crate.
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Mary Nagy
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David Gerardino 13 September 2006

look at the things you treasure, great line........................

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Duncan Wyllie 23 March 2006

Again Mary, this shows the heart of someone who has real persective. 'Just as a sadness of your lost youth starts to wash over me' A lost youth, boys to men too soon.Yes I get this one.Love Duncan

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Uriah Hamilton 14 March 2006

Mary, I think your family is very lucky, you're written such a lovely history of the family heart!

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Scarlett Treat 13 March 2006

Lucky little guy to have a mommy - excuse me, I meant MOM, like you. This touched me deeply, because I also have a son who is now away from home. How I miss those 'boy' things....love ya, Scarlett

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Joy Vanderhelm 13 March 2006

Flawless imagery and emotion. It brought tears to my eyes and the fervent wish that, should I have children, I'll be even half the mother you are, Mary. An ageless poem that speaks to every woman's heart I am sure. Thank you for this.

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Ernestine Northover 13 March 2006

Delightful write. Memories of made of this. You are a great writer. Love Ernestine XXX

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Rusty Daily 13 March 2006

Very nice Mary. I remember when my little boy became too old to hold my hand when we took our walks. Just one of those stages of growth. Fortunately, I have his phone number so I can find him. lol Especially when I have something heavy to move or my computer is acting up. Nice write Mary. Rusty

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Brian Dorn 13 March 2006

Very cute! I'm sure Napoleon Dynomite would say you write with 'skill'. Loved the movie... love your poem. Brian

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Patricia Gale 13 March 2006

So heart felt Mary. I recall when my son was there. Now married but he still is my baby boy and he knows it. Patricia

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