Friday, October 31, 2008

Somewhere Beneath The Leaves Comments

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Autumn gloom comes once again
Along with barren trees
Somewhere a child lies
Beneath the fallen leaves
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Coach Roth 31 October 2008

Don't apologize Sydney...it is fine...all things can be improved once you step back from them, but this elicits a beautiful poignant mood and imagery...it flows very nicely...keep on writing...Coach

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