Thursday, July 14, 2005

Somewhere: A Hand Is Reading Out Loud Comments

Rating: 4.3

Somewhere a hand is reading out loud-
an old bible, a weatherworn journal.
Recording the daily assaults –
memorizing rain and shielding eyes
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Amberlee Carter
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Deepak Amembal 19 July 2005

yes amberlee.....somewhere something keeps happening....the earth is such a happening place! ! ! ! live it! it is now!

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wow. you've been writing some really impressive poems lately. i absolutely love the objective approach of this piece; writing about connected external events vs. internal emotional conflict, yet still retaining the emotion in each described vignette. simply fantastic. Jake

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Michael Philips 14 July 2005

I am so impressed with your poetry, Amberlee. You have an intelligent yet breezy style which is very original. I hope you submit your poems to a publisher. You deserve a broader audience.

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Uriah Hamilton 14 July 2005

truly beautiful and amazing poem! ! !

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A. B. 14 July 2005

Very beautiful indeed. Nice work Amberlee.

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