Somewhat Melancholy Comments

'A very nice poem this turned to be... No typo's were detected or seen by me. Another tip for the ryming verse... Is reading of many poems by different writers, in turn this will make your style real good and not much to be worse. Another tip is to use the right word for the right meaning... This will in turn bring back a much better recieved proper screening.' Good poem, God bless and best wishes-Mike Gale.