No nudge,
however fitted to the contours of the shoulder
by impassioned ergonomics,
- pyrotic and smoldering, engineered for self-ignition
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Speaking of the word 'intelligent, ' that's what this poem is. Very smart, Ian. Well constructed too. No cliches or over-used images. A nice controlled burn. Excellent.
I don'tknow if I can add to what Hound has said. This is excellent fantastic visuals. Well done for not putting a whole load of your work on the site in one go. This is the way to attract attention to one's work. Respect Denis Joe