Sometimes When The Internet's Down Poem by Seamus O' Brian

Sometimes When The Internet's Down

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Sometimes when the internet's down
I think some thoughts.

My fingers fidget, and the spinning icon taunts,
But when the links don't link, and the silence
Of the screen fails to tell me what to think
I think of something else.

Of somewhere else.
Of sometime else- or someone else.
But these thoughts belong to me. Not borrowed
Or programmed or directed.

And I remember what I was before I was
A status. Before my wonder of the world
Was the answer to a Google search.
Before my relationships were itemized
In pull down menus.

When being 'liked' looked like a smile
Or a wagging tale.
When 'poking' my kids caused giggles-
sofa squirming, wriggling giggles
and autofill was five kids in the back seat

Sometime when the internet's down,
I remember who I am.

Tuesday, September 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: internet,social media
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suzan Gumush 01 January 2018

An interesting poem it sends a good message. excellent verse.

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Tan Pratonix 22 November 2016

Those last lines tell us everything! Sometime when the internet's down, I remember who I am. I think life was more meaningful and productive and worthwhile before the Internet!

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

Galway, Ireland
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