Sometimes when I'm dreaming..........
My world is bright and clear -
I know my heart,
I know my part,
...
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This just trips along beautifully...smooth and dreamlike :) jack.
Linda, I enjoyed this write. It reaches out with such a beautiful energy, to rightness of heart, and to a world that is so greatly in need of a leading gentle healing voice filled with verb. Blessings, Debora
I knew those words and dreams and feelings once. You express them finely. t x
Linda...Well crafted work..In particular, the meticuli attention employed on your stanzaic construction...mellifluously smooth.and cosmetically pleasing the eye. ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F. j. R.
i definately envy you're writing. hopefully i can write like that soon: -)
I love dreaming, but it's hard waking up... Love your thoughts, great poem! Lee
I love this poem, the rhythm is great and it has heart.