Sunday, December 17, 2006

Sometimes When I'M Dreaming Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes when I'm dreaming..........
My world is bright and clear -
I know my heart,
I know my part,
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Linda Ori
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Dillian Hansen 10 April 2018

I love this poem, the rhythm is great and it has heart.

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jack russell 17 December 2006

This just trips along beautifully...smooth and dreamlike :) jack.

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Debora Short 17 December 2006

Linda, I enjoyed this write. It reaches out with such a beautiful energy, to rightness of heart, and to a world that is so greatly in need of a leading gentle healing voice filled with verb. Blessings, Debora

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I knew those words and dreams and feelings once. You express them finely. t x

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 December 2006

Linda...Well crafted work..In particular, the meticuli attention employed on your stanzaic construction...mellifluously smooth.and cosmetically pleasing the eye. ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F. j. R.

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Alexis Rosas 17 December 2006

i definately envy you're writing. hopefully i can write like that soon: -)

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Lee Degnan 17 December 2006

I love dreaming, but it's hard waking up... Love your thoughts, great poem! Lee

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