Sometimes, when I’m dreaming,
I feel you by my side
In the moonlight gleaming,
And when the sun has died.
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Beautifully written Val. Tender emotions presented with your usual perfect syncopation. This poem is a rose among thorns, a lonely little petunia in an onion patch.
When dreaming, the world is divine. Beautiful poem.
In the moonlight gleaming and when the sun has died... simple but great line
A very beautiful poem, sometimes the dream world can seem like the better world.
A beautiful imagery consoling the soul... so nice so soothing, only love can give. You may read my poem I miss that gift.
Beautiful sentiment... lovely in its essence of dream-like softness... wonderfully composed... beautifully penned.
Straight from the heart; 'Love beyond all time and space.' Very well written, Val.
This poem is romantic and eloquent...Loved it :)