Tuesday, March 5, 2019

Sometimes When. Comments

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Sometimes if you try
You will almost see the sky
And know that it is
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Carl Roussell
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awww so sad... must be awful to give up hope! looking at the sky however I do not know how this is possible?

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Carl Roussell 06 April 2019

I tried to imply that clouds obscure the Sun, Moon and the stars, all is hope is hidden.

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Practicing Poetess 08 March 2019

'Despair' is an appropriate topic description, for this one goes much deeper than mere sadness. Like a total and complete loss of hope.

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Carl Roussell 09 March 2019

Yes, if you feel as though you have lost all hope, what are you left with?

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Matthew Holloway 06 March 2019

a really wonderful piece thank you

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Carl Roussell 06 March 2019

Thanks and glad you like the poem.

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Carl Roussell 05 March 2019

Your comment is much appreciated. thank you.

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C F 05 March 2019

Stunning write on despair and broken dreams, a poem I wished I could have written!

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Carl Roussell

Carl Roussell

Trenton, Ontario
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