Sunday, November 25, 2012

Sometimes (What I Am) Comments

Rating: 3.5

Sometimes when I get sad
I force my tears inside
I do not show emotion
I bottle pain with pride
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Sandy Player 04 December 2012

If true men are ignorant of their own disadvantages it's better not to be one. At the end of the day you are who you are and though that may seem like a life scentence, from where we see you, it is a beautiful truth. You're a tremendous poet, keep it up!

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Rachel Dowd 03 December 2012

Good work keep it up

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Jem Solley 27 November 2012

Really good, really showing emotion that many people feel and has a fantastic flow. Please check out some of my poems if you ever have the time.

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