Friday, November 18, 2016

Sometimes We Just Be There Comments

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Sometimes we just be there
In a place where hundreds people are still around
But we feel alone
Trying to understand but we dont
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Adilson Pinto 28 August 2017

This is really a feeling which comes to us in many situations, not only one, several people around and we feeling still alone... Notwithstanding there are moments we are alone, and we feel as a lot of people are around us! Why? Because to be with ourselves it is an art in every instant of our lives! Great psychological poem! ! ! Hugs from Brazil dear poet and friend!

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Sekharan Pookkat 01 April 2017

hundreds may around you but standing on the shore alive breathing slowly reflecting mist in eyes may found somtimes in the crowd - my ten too

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Unwritten Soul 10 April 2017

Thank you dear :)

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Christopher Tye 30 November 2016

Wonderful poem and great sentiments. It's really sad that after all our progress as a people we still have so much homelessness and social isolation. It seems that the more advanced we get the less humanity we have, the problems in Syria and the Sudan just so how bad we can be as a people.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2016

We are just imperfect human Feeling alone when hundreds are still around Searching for the heart that not judge but understand Because life carries struggles Because different lives have different stories But someday we will be there...or here.... fantastic expression. Marvellous poem shared....10 Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 November 2016

Understanding the ways of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rebecca Navarre 25 November 2016

Deeply Wonderful! ! ! Very Moving And Inspiring! ! ! Heart Felt Poem Excellently Done! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Sharing This! ! ! 10S! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Muhammad Ali 18 November 2016

crime of that society I wanted to write

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Muhammad Ali 18 November 2016

Space, is one of greatest creation by Him. Space is there in outside world, and there is another Space inside that we feel, that makes one a poet, and same about time I think. There always be the extreme various styles of life. What we miss! The cause to live to die. To be alone somewhere in a mob, I think it is a big crime movie f that society, but I feel same too, and do it to others. and for smile, somewhere a smile become cheaper than a cup of tea. nice to meet you again :)

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Unwritten Soul 19 November 2016

Thank you dear Muhammad Ali, its not for us to be here to point out bad thing without solution, blaming is change nothing right? so i dont blame any you, me, he, she and them...whoever, because sometimes we just to busy with our own life, but if someone reminds us and when we realize it, lets make a change to be better...I know all of us want to live well, loved, peace, respect so why dont we always be nice to each other without judging, you know dear Muhammad Ali...once i heard someone said if you dont want to be like him then you should study well, i was little at that time and when i growing up i think it was intentionally right but it is not right for other things...Sometimes even it was just an advice it seems like Insulting to others, no one knows how much he struggles to get his own education, he worked as labour but whats wrong with that because at least he never steal or beg u everytime. I feel like we have to start think about other before we start uttering words freely...maybe i am too sensitive but everyone deserved to get respect :) Thanks dear for your beautiful words

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Hans Vr 18 November 2016

This is so beautiful and deep. While addressing a painful truth that so often we are alone in a crowd, this poem looks like an invitation to to the crowd not to let anyone inside the crowd to feel alone. A smile a word of kindness, so powerful and so precious. I am sure this poem has the seeds inside it to go on and inspire many people to make a positive difference even if it is only for that one member of the crowd that looks a bit lost.

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Unwritten Soul 19 November 2016

Thank you Hans. A little act can change surrounding to be better or worse. Genuine smile always bring positive one. I always think its fine to take care of others even to them we are just a totally stranger...Stranger is because we never met before, but we are the same and equal in heart and in this big family :) Thanks Hans...thank you so much. :)

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Unwritten Soul 18 November 2016

Kim Barney Comment: You are right. A smile from others can make a big difference in a person's life (this from the poet's note) . Sometimes we just have to be there to support someone. Little needs to be said.

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