Monday, April 7, 2014

Sometimes The Sun Shines In The Darkest Places Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes the Sun shines in the darkest places,
Bringing Light where only deepest traces
Of Pain in Love can be found. And profound
Longing trickles with the Brook's saddest sound,
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Brett White
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Hannington Mumo 11 August 2020

This truly ranks clearly higher than most of the pieces I've so far perused on this universalized platform...evident traces of genuine poetic effort and connoisseur-grade tinkerings with nuance well amply attest to the author's colossal literary penchant. Great work, this one - kudos!

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Practicing Poetess 20 September 2017

A poem of depth, passion, and precision- - it was hard work writing a poem of that length, while still retaining your rhyme scheme! How is it that you are only at Level 2 with all that talent? This poem is deserving of, and shall receive a 10! - -From another hopeless romantic

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Howard Savage 01 February 2016

Great po0wem of reality, because the sun shinned in my life and drove away the darkness. #10

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Sadie Luton 22 January 2016

LOVELY POEM.. GREAT GREAT GREAT

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