Sometimes...Past, Present, Future Comments

a nice romantic write. A loving companion makes the past, present and future better

the concept is very good here.. written equally good... may yr wish come true.. :) ..

That's a wonderful set of emotions that you pendown in the form of poetic gesture..The giral about whom you talked must be blessed one to have such a thoughful life partner like you...Lovely thought..you deserve 10++ for this :)

Nice poem comes across well