Sometimes it takes a tragedy
to help us see things clear,
and then we get a glimpse of life
without our loved ones here.
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What a moving poem Mary - so well crafted. It gets a 10 but if there was a 11 or a twelve out of 10 you get that too. Thanks for sharing Uday Balakrishnan
Great thoughts, for it took a tragedy to start my career in poetry. Time waits for no one, You find this out when you reach my age. read your work every day. charles garcia
Next time I'm about to let difficulties with a loved one get out of hand I'll remember the sentiment driving this beautifully tailored and emotive poem. Thank you.
I sometimes forget to say it. Thank you for reminding me. Warmly, Julia
Dear Mary, you have shared deep feelings with us here and I feel both previlaged and saddened by the touch of your words.God Keep You All.Love Duncan
Okay, Mary. Now you MUST write something lighter, although I do like your 'dark' ones. Best H
That's what I'm praying for too Mary. A real heart searching poem, but beautifully written once again. Love Ernestine XXX A 10 from me.
This is lovely Mary, fingers crossed for many more years, Moyaxx
Please let it, indeed. Good thoughtful poem about fears that lurk at the back of all our minds
A beautifully touching poem Mary, as you may know, I lost my love in this way. Didn't make the hospital though. Your poem does say a lot about what is truly important in life, ie relationships. I wish yours to go on for at least 50 years and that is not impossible either. Great work as always Mary, 10 from seeing things clearly and looking forward to a brighter future, Tai
So true, Mary. Life is precious, and love is measured in so many little things that mean so much. Many hugs, CJ
life is that way! Go on