Sometimes It's Better To Stand Comments

Fabulous write David. The title grabbed me by the collar and led me in... I wasn't disappointed though. On the contrary, much pondering but great depth and poignancy. You pen your angst eloquently - fab! HG: -) xx

Great right. A lot of us know exactly how you feel.

Discussions and no action... agenda and resolutions to resolve, what a conclusion.... I liked the finish, it is brilliant David..10 Rema

LOVE THIS ONE! . Really creative, imaginative. your great at this. thanks for the comment on mine btw. mine look c**p compared to yours lol good luck with the rest.

We all sit like you, marvelling at how grown up the others seem. Fx

Hang in there, David they find castles block upon airless block room after room in silent lock no life in the walls only whitewash nothing to offfer to the living leading nowhere on sandy foundations Hang in there, david, hang in there breathe dance

Most interesting and perceptive take on the corporate life! HG: -) xx

A day such as this would crush me! Great poem and I'm glad I am at least missing out on something written in someone else's poem.

So you, me and Anita all work in the same office.... we really must start exchanging mails, not work-related of course. t x

The strong play on words with clipped and isolated imagery takes this poem out of the office and into the street. Where legends are born. Rgds, Ivan

Oh this sounds so familiar! Did you visit my office? Angst ridden [aren't we all], on the ball and cooool!