Monday, July 27, 2009

Sometimes I Write The Ocean Comments

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Sometimes it seems
I always write the ground
I never write the stars, the clouds
Sometimes I write the ocean
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Raymond J Wright
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Susan Jarvis 09 August 2009

A beautiful extended metaphor that addresses every element, every season and every emotion. You have written the ocean and beyond! S :)

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