Tuesday, June 16, 2009

Sometimes I Wonder Comments

Rating: 5.0

sometimes i get to thinking and i begin to wonder why...
how come we cant live 2gether, and yet we cannot say goodbye
we are as different as day n night
this i know is true
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krissi b'williams
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The Dreamer 26 June 2009

sometimes i feel like giving up bcuz i cant withstand the pain but then i look into your eyes n my heart melts once again -----Love this and many more thank you really great 10++++

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Kevin Fisher 17 June 2009

hmpt interesting just another 10 for you your words are so inspiring

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Eyan Desir 16 June 2009

Well I must say even if your poems are long Your words flow pretty good You got talent....what you write are not classed as poems But, I thinking you should write books Of drama and stuff, , you keep it interesting right through......I'm not been modest I dont really like reading long writing like this but you write them with a great flow... I'm hooked...10+ Very very good

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