Wednesday, October 22, 2008

Sometimes I Wish Comments

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Sometimes I wish that I didn't feel like this
that my heart didn't control me the way it does
that everytime i saw your face I didn't smile
That your very laugh didn't warm my heart
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Kaushik C 30 October 2008

great work....lot of real feelings in the poem and the way you have got the course of the poem is simply superb...nice rhymes...

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Shilesha Johnson 24 October 2008

o my goodness. i love this poem. this is how i have been feeling alot lately. wow you described it so well. word for word. you are a true poet. great job

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