Saturday, October 17, 2009

Sometimes I Feel Comments

Rating: 2.8

sometimes I feel
as though I don't feel at all

I can't reach my thoughts
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A. E Loewer
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Mal Sharp 02 November 2009

I like this poem and can relate to it well. I also think it's beautiful in its simplicity. Thank you.

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Mark Buford 20 October 2009

tell the actual source of your sadness in a more detailed poem. Sound very depressed. The sun shines :) The moon beams :) breathe their beauty in :)

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