Monday, June 1, 2009

Sometimes Good By Is A Second Chance ~ Comments

Rating: 3.5

Please forgive me, for the wrong's i've done
And the pain, I have put you through. Give me
A second chance at our romance. To prove
My love is true. If we could only start again.
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Thad Wilk
COMMENTS
BreOnna Schneck 10 February 2010

that is beautiful. I'll be your Adam and you'll be my Eve. Just absolutely wonderful.

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Meggie Gultiano 06 June 2009

asking for forgiveness is a very humbling act.You did it, Friend Thad...and i do miss reading your poems. hugs from here, Meggie

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Duh Huh 06 June 2009

Well, for all its worth, you have my vote too Thad, i hope she gives you a second chance, who can she resist that beautiful plea for love. Thank you for sharing :)

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Tia Maria 02 June 2009

Sweet talk when it's genuine does work - good luck friend Thad :) I sure melted when I read this :)

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Tsira Goge 02 June 2009

Very nice... To poets is a lot of second chance because women's love, majority is going by ears / With a smile.../ 10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Andrew Blakemore 02 June 2009

Excellent poem Thad, it could have been written by a grand master such is the power, feeling and emotion in your words. Top marks my friend. Best wishes, Andrew

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Little Hatila ;) 02 June 2009

wowwwwww...you should have been forgiven by now ;) Hataw

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 01 June 2009

Go on forgive him, he is a romantic fool :) Nice one my mate.. Andy 10

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Fiona Davidson 01 June 2009

What a brilliant write this is Thad...some good byes can be second chancves if handled right...Fi 10+++

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