Sunday, April 8, 2007

Sometimes Falling Away... Comments

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Her eyes are closed But shes not asleep
Her eyes are closed God's answers she seeks.
She opens her eyes But still she is pained
She opens her eyes Good Lord to the shame.
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Shelley L Baxter
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Jamal Ludin 09 April 2007

love with spiritual connotation

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Jamal Ludin 09 April 2007

i like the structure and the repetition of words-the very stuff of poetry

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Shelley L Baxter

Shelley L Baxter

Calgary, Canada.
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