Sunday, August 2, 2020

Sometimes Comments

Rating: 4.9

May you sing a song sometimes
May you compose a tune sometimes
May you play a vocal music sometimes
That may remove my all ugliness!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 October 2020

A well composed poem. Truly fascinating...5 stars

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Khairul Ahsan 12 September 2020

May all your wishes be met sometimes, May your heart do as it likes, sometimes! Loved your poem, and the philosophy lying between the lines.

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Bharati Nayak 30 August 2020

May you sing a song sometimes May you compose a tune sometimes May you play a vocal music sometimes That may remove my all ugliness! - - - - - A wonderful prayer to Almighty to keep our hearts pure where beauty and love will sing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 August 2020

Nature can always bring wonders to humanity. Poets are always inspired by its beauty. And likewise, a great Poet can always inspire through the beauty and power of his pen. A lovely poem that sings the many wonders of nature. So mellifluous when read.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 August 2020

May you sing a song sometimes May you compose a tune sometimes May you play a vocal music sometimes That may remove my all ugliness! Let us sing only the song of beauty and love and remove all hatred and ugliness. Wonderful poem Sir.......10

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me poet yeps poet 06 August 2020

SOMETIME, sometime sometime keep boring say ALLTIMEALLTIME All-time. JA Sirrrrrrrrrrr SITE is not fair with me and all my friends leaving me NOW WHAT IS MY FAULT.... I WRITE WHAT I FEEL, YOU ARE MY POET SIR. THIS POEM SOMETIME HOW RELATED TO NATURE?

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M Asim Nehal 03 August 2020

Fantastic poem. 10++ I quote: May you bloom a flower sometimes May you decorate the greenery sometimes May you provide a taste sometimes That may help my heart to create wonders! Amusing......

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