Tuesday, May 29, 2018

Sometimes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes I hear your voice, rasping, cruel, releasing venom drip by drip,
burning like acid on contact.
Remembering instead, a winter sun and our cheeks brushing softly together,
whispered breath, misting, whilst kissing.
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StevieC Poet
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Jazib Kamalvi 30 May 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Stevie C. P. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Steviec Poet 30 May 2018

Thank you so much!

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Lodigiana Poetess 30 May 2018

A truly lovely piece SteivieC! ...+++10

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Steviec Poet 30 May 2018

so pleased that you enjoyed it

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Chinedu Dike 29 May 2018

An insightful piece on the whimsical and temperamental nature of love, well articulated and elegantly penned in persuasive poetic diction from the heart. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Stevie and do remain enriched.

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Steviec Poet 30 May 2018

Thank you appreciate your comments

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