'Sometimes' Comments

We are but only human, my son What I say to you now, I would say to you always We must act, that is our call Greet and surmise the present As it stands Beckoning us, testing us in ways beyond our seeing… We can do what we must- stand and witness… - A fine positive poem, I liked it very much.

Since, it is based on your own experience the entire narrative is quite impressive as is backed by your actions and your confidence in the power of 'now'. It's a motivational poem. The language and the phrases employed by the poet make it a power-packed writing. Thanks. Man proposes and God disposes There is a silence before a storm. Perhaps the ‘now', is a moment of reckoning for a future so great- we cannot foresee.