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The tale of the two love birds.

Wanting to fly is a feeling that we all have had at one time or another. We have flown in our dreams and it can feel so real. Up, up and away! I have a poem called If I Can Fly Feel free to read when you have time.

Divided segments here, for us easy to get and dissolve all the feeling in it, nice_Soul

Imagination is the art of mind..so colourful

Great story of imagination - we poets all float on such feathers.

Sometimes our dreams become a reality. A good write.

sometimes my imagination rides on a dream-mail. nice

sometimes my imagination rides on a dream-mail. nice thought.

I agree with Farah below, simple imagery flows better.

Awesome, check out Stardust.

simple but beautiful imagery poem...slightly falls into heart