Sometimes Comments

I think everyone can relate to this poem. As always a superb write my friend. Sometimes I feel the same and it is nice to know that I'm not alone.

@Erika Wingo, Your succinct compliments, conveyed in a single sentence, is indeed very inspiring. Thank you very much!

@ Susy Evelyne, Thanks for your inspiring comment.

@Nivedita Patnaik, Thanks for your considered views. Thoughtful.

@ Elena Plotkin, Thanks for your comments.

@ Heather Wilkins, Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your thoughts here. I am inspired.

@ Md Asadullah, Thank you for your kind appreciation and generous rating. Your words are very inspiring.

Sometimes, my heart does yearn, To be away from the noisy crowd, And wait patiently to take its turn, To fly in the azure sky as a cloud. phenomenal lines. a wonderful piece. loved it. a 10 from me. :)

The way you have captured emotions and poured them into the words is exquisite.

You open your soul for all to see in - and we are privileged. A beautiful poem.

Loved the last but one stanza....lucid depiction and vivid imagery....good one...

Beautifully written. Sometimes, a cheerful mind gets Overcast by gloom and sorrow, Random thoughts of life's regrets Renders the heart quite narrow.

sometimes thoughts of the past sneak a quick peek at my heart. I know the feeling. good imagery.

@ Aftab Alam Khursheed, Thanks for your wonderful observation, and a generous 10!

Waning and waxing is the nature like day and night / birth and death / beautiful poem 10

Neela, Thanks for your thoughtful comment on my poem. I am inspired. Such inspiring words cast away the engulfing gloom that takes one over. By the way, where is 'Dikshunyopur'? In which state of India?

@Mary Forrester, Thanks! You have a kind heart.

Nicely woven thought and construction of the poem.

I understand how you feel and beautifully expressed Khairul.

I understand how you feel and beautifully expressed Khairul.