Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Sometimes Comments

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Sometimes you feel that your presence isnt very much affecting the people around you.
Sometimes you feel left-out, you feel lost.
Sometimes you want to speak your heart out but could see no one around.
Sometimes you desperately wait for someone to knock at your door but could hear not even some hush.
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Jaya Mishra
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Kishor Pathak 04 January 2013

Beautiful write...Could have been better if lines would have been short and fragmented...

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Kanav Justa 08 December 2012

Nice write jaya....

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Sahil Sood 28 November 2012

just so true, emotional and natural.. happens wit everyone.. luvd this poem..

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Shihabudheen K J 28 November 2012

Just true words.very emotional rather gracing the poetry elements well

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