Saturday, October 8, 2011

Sometimes :) Comments

Rating: 2.1

Sometimes i fall asleep wishing your next to me.

Sometimes i walk places and i wishes your next to me
holding my cold hands carefully.
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Kara Aleid was Thomas
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Khalid Loves Cara More 16 December 2011

tehee :) , well you got your dream come true kiss :) now am waiting for you to untie my tongue you forget the french kiss: L ;) xxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Pharnell Raines 23 October 2011

Beautiful. You have captured the essence of youthful purity within romantic passion. Keep writing, your heart will continue to guide you.

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Abi Whitaker 08 October 2011

i love this! i totaly get what you mean

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Vipins Puthooran 08 October 2011

It's a nice song...i like this one for the feel you've created in this poem....

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