Thursday, May 6, 2010

Sometimes Comments

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Sometimes your timeless plans
take violent turns
Sometimes your biggest smile
is the fakest yet
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Silver C. Day
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John Knight 09 May 2010

Hi Silver - Love the YIN & YANG of theis poem and i am honoured to be the first to comment. The equilibrium we (generally) enjoy on Earth is amintained by a careful balance of opposites - hot & cold - black & white - male & female - rich & poor - happiness & misery etc. We accept this in the balance of our own lives and communities. SOMETIMES - however hard we try - our initial expectations are shattered and we get - bad not good - sour not sweet and hatred not love. We always cope by believing that tomorrow the opposite will happen. Please keep in touch and - if you have time - read soem more of my poems. Thanks for sahring - Yours through poetry - JOHN.

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