Sometimes Comments

'It is sometimes needy to stand tall Even when we are pushily pulled to fall' i really like this! Very good poem. One of my fav by far. adding it to my fav poem list. Perhaps you could read one of mine 'let go'.

Very wise write and good to read - you have started off well - congratulations

Perfection did means not coming to decision......a fantastic write. you have the marvellous potential in writing.

u have expressed life so perfectly..u amazing..brilliant work

im an amatuer poet but can spot value from a distance. its a perfect discription of life itself. if u get the time, please read my poems and comment about them. criticize if neccesasry, i do not mind. its a learning experience. How will i archieve if i do not get criticism?

Life is just full of everything around