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'So just be you even when you're blue, show your love and smile in every hue' - it's difficult, but possible with practice.

A lesson for us all to never forget. You are a bringer of wise things no doubt about it. Well written and with passion and great rthym... I like... Jim Troy

Perhaps everything starts in the frame of sometime and ends in sometime....liked the imageries u portrayed here....Subjective and explained with variety.Impeccable

This is lovely, hopeful and balancing thanks

so true.....keep on writing, i know you will...

A nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

so may emotions expressed here and I felt every single one while reading..great job :)

Very expressive words and full of strong emotions and feelings.. I really liked the poem.. Keep writing my friend.. Regards, Faith..

Sometimes we find ourselves trapped in a reflection and emotion could lay low, we were torn but nothing can take human will! ! ! ! Concluded well and this is a poem with spirit. Keep writing, my friend.

The very begginning was alright but it could be improved the rest as you went on got great you really started to get into it. i loved it!

Beautiful haunting and complex. I love your lines and the words you speak. We are all broken at one time or another. It matters what we do about it. You say it so beautifully to be broken and yet its ok. I take it that you say without saying what we do after. Great write 10+