Sometime Something Works..... Comments

This piece of yours certainly shows modernization in the world of poetry ;)

Mmmmmmmm poem? ? ? Of course it is........ century 21st.... a nice blend of prosaic and fancies.... Surely set new standards of the sacred ART called poetry........ Find couple of words new to my poor comprehension....

nicely written well penned poem love your spirit of writing great talent

Sure, it does work sometimes, and many times, just do try who knows the possibility, no one knows...so try your best as it works maybe, because we never know if we never try..sometimes it just turn be a huge great things _Soul