Monday, June 23, 2008

Sometime I Cry... Comments

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Sometimes when I’m alone
I cry because I’m lonely and on my own
The tears I cry are bitter and warm
They flow with life but take no form of it
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Farhana Abdullah
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Celise Mclean 27 June 2008

Powerfull words Farhana, your poem really is a eye opener, I feel your pain I think everyone has pretty much been their and belive me your not on your own you relive your pain through your poetry, which gives the reader an insight in how your feeling, not everyone can do that.

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Serenity Prayer 23 June 2008

i feel that way too. amazing write. i can totally relate.

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Farhana Abdullah

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Kota Kinabalu SABAH, MALAYSIA
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