Wednesday, January 14, 2009

Something To Say Comments

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i have something to say to you
but the words just come out wrong
so i try to call you but your never at home
i leave a message on the answer phone
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John Mccudden
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Ana Sanchez 17 January 2009

I like this one..Sometimes i feel like that.. My words are always mis-interpret...you learn from your mistakes.. this taught me to think before I act.hehe

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Carolyn Brunelle 15 January 2009

John you have a wonderful ability to write rhyming pieces that don't get in the way of the message you're trying to convey and that's important. It allows the reader to appreciate the content and get to the meat of your message in an effortless way, making the whole work appear easy and fluid. It's a talent. Keep up the good work! ! ! I promise to keep reading, I really appreciate your writing.

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