Friday, October 23, 2009

Something To Remember Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everything was soft that day...
Like the color of grace or
The scent of mercy.
The air, the sun, and the wind were all soft.
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Brenda Arroyo
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memories are like eggs.. you keep the good.. and get rid of the bad.. i like your poem.

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Robin Andersson 03 November 2009

Absolutely beautiful Brenda

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2009

As hours go by, emptiness only serves as a sole reminder to the soulless.......something toremember when feel free or sit in idleness.. it is just an sweet rememebrence ...lovely poem to be rememebred....10 red mine.. innoence regained...mary to marry..... miss i miss you...as a friend

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Brenda Arroyo

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