Thursday, April 19, 2012

Something To Believe In Comments

Rating: 4.8

She closed her heart like an old screen door
She didn't want to use it anymore
Like a blue sky fading to grey
She slowly lost the colors in her face
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Rosalyn Grohol
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Anil Kumar Panda 26 April 2012

your style and use of words to express your heart is very nice.liked it.go on inking.

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Romeo Della Valle 22 April 2012

Wow! What a beautiful and touching write which is highlighted by powerful rhyme scheme and rich imagery! Superb! This amazing write, my dear friend Rosalyn, clearly shows your great poetic talent that if seriously explored, it will take you to the top of the Poetry World one day! 10+++ It has been a great pleasure to read and enjoy this wonderful write! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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