Sunday, June 28, 2009

Something That She Said Comments

Rating: 5.0

She had so much potential it sometimes got her down,
she didn’t like her work but it got her into town.

It really was a problem but she chose to ignore it,
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Adrian Cox
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Stephanie Fiddy 12 July 2009

wonderful write! pleasent all the way to the end

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 06 July 2009

How many fall into this trap and live to regret it - do we learn...that is the question? Like the composition...well written

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Anjali Sinha 03 July 2009

This sometimes happens-- in a split second we say something which is senseless to the opposite party and then comes unpleasantness.... a thought provoking poem good write -10 anjali

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Mikayla Carpenter 29 June 2009

Nicely wrttien,10++: ] I enjoyed the read.

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James Mclain 28 June 2009

I enjoyed this tid bit of information..yes we have to ignore the ride and get back into town..iip... :)

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