Something's Imminent Comments

I like the conversational tone of this piece, Sean- the bar colloquialisms etc. Ultimately, it is about a past relationship but what I love is that it's only alluded to. Ever the defiant male, your narrator does not get to the bottom of the matter but in a rather self-deluding manner, hopes for some amicable resolution. This has the makings of a great dramatic monolgue. I'm impressed.